Do you like my poem? Suggestions greatly appreciated...?

Okay, let's get started, the first sentence that said "or not" should be taken out because that is extra detail. The second correction is about the 4th line. There is no other word following but. I suggest move that word to the "My feet are still caught" sentence in the beginning. It would sound more accurate that way. In the 10th line, the "that" in the beginning of the line is can be moved to the 9th line. In the sentence before "Despise the endless, winding road" part, you don't have to add the dots. That is all the changes you may need to change in the poem. The title needs working a little. You are on track of the title Ambivalence, let's call it Feelings of Ambivalence or Ambivalence and Givings. I hope this helps. CUL8R!!!